tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post7414661638151529130..comments2023-08-23T16:05:42.047-04:00Comments on BLACK MAMBA: StopFireblossomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-71530696309797971202019-09-02T11:50:37.940-04:002019-09-02T11:50:37.940-04:00Ouch...Perfectly written from beginning to ending....Ouch...Perfectly written from beginning to ending...Damn!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-66198263841447445512019-09-01T20:33:08.475-04:002019-09-01T20:33:08.475-04:00Fury fills this poem.Fury fills this poem.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-15711346237354463872019-09-01T14:32:42.962-04:002019-09-01T14:32:42.962-04:00The person who goes through life without caring......The person who goes through life without caring...you have nailed this poemtonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12299970145155468689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-57873257265272805612019-09-01T08:35:12.441-04:002019-09-01T08:35:12.441-04:00Striking poem and it definitely sticks the landing...Striking poem and it definitely sticks the landing :)C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-44660244421676574882019-09-01T00:14:08.477-04:002019-09-01T00:14:08.477-04:00Time--and infuriating behavior--can certainly wilt...Time--and infuriating behavior--can certainly wilt a smile (and so many other things).Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-76078803770103095862019-08-31T15:54:37.036-04:002019-08-31T15:54:37.036-04:00This poem made me feel as if surrounded by ghosts....This poem made me feel as if surrounded by ghosts. Braggarts still talking a good game but they're just showing off. Essence without form.Lorihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12582954414536409107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-54858465959026499592019-08-31T15:36:16.452-04:002019-08-31T15:36:16.452-04:00Oh you still got it! In fact I feel like I'm s...Oh you still got it! In fact I feel like I'm seeing a new stageCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-70087605714078722162019-08-31T11:55:00.074-04:002019-08-31T11:55:00.074-04:00That first stanza is amazing and quite a gut punch...That first stanza is amazing and quite a gut punch of truth. Love the raw and intense feeling in this whole poem Shay. Once again you have said it like no one else can. Truly rock star writing as always. I love it!!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469507370783120374.post-39148988044650268162019-08-31T11:48:37.041-04:002019-08-31T11:48:37.041-04:00I know this feeling. Owwwwww! I love every perfect...I know this feeling. Owwwwww! I love every perfect line.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com