Saturday, September 1, 2018

Gitche Gumee

"Superior it's said never gives up her dead" --Gordon Lightfoot

"If you seek a pleasant peninsula, look about you." --Michigan state motto.
 

We were up north; it was June.
My father, ten feet tall and carrying the sun on his shoulder,
explained to me how Gitche Gumee loved winter
and carried him with her far into summer.

I learned to skip stones that year--
spotted Petoskys as cold as the lake itself.
I spent time poured out across the old couch in our rented cottage
reading sci-fi novels I'd found.
They were full of futures and so was I.

Mornings, I searched for sea glass and empty shells,
the ends of my hair trailing in wet sand as I bent for them.
Down the beach, my parents argued in pantomime.
I was seven, a little pitcher with big ears.
By the time the big lake warmed, my mother would be hard and broken,
and I would miss my father, his shoulder empty where I used to ride.
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for this.

15 comments:

  1. Oh my. I love the connection between the sun and the Petoskey's - rising suns encased in rock. Such a bitter summer to be sure. Skipping stones is magic, the way the stones skim across the surface of the water, sort of how the nautilus propels itself under the water. Your mother became a bit of a fossil it seems, encapsulated in those arguments. You a wistful child seeking treasures at the edge of the water.

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  2. This. This is absolutely my favorite of all poems I've read of yours. It truly moved me and I just can't say in words how sadly beautifully written this is... full of a little girl's voice, vulnerability and acute observation. I've got to share this.

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  3. What Margaret said. I so know that small girl, so acutely sensitive to the big peoples' pain and anger. I loved the tall father striding so hopefully in the first stanza, am struck by the mother, later, hard and broken. Wow.

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  4. What a great memory, Shay. I love the way it starts with:
    'My father, ten feet tall and carrying the sun on his shoulder'
    and how this echoes in the ending:
    '...I would miss my father, his shoulder empty where I used to ride'.
    I love the fine details:
    'I spent time poured out across the old couch in our rented cottage
    reading sci-fi novels I'd found.
    They were full of futures and so was I'
    and
    'Mornings, I searched for sea glass and empty shells,
    the ends of my hair trailing in wet sand as I bent for them.
    Down the beach, my parents argued in pantomime'.

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  5. I spent a lot of time at the beach in my own childhood – and am a child of divorce, though it didn't play out in quite the same way; and when I was small I adored my father. So there is a lot to relate to here, But if there wasn't, I'm sure I would still love every rich detail of place and relationship in this wonderful, and wonderfully grounded poem. (Though damn! I never did master skipping stones.)

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  6. You present the nostalgia without sentiment, making it all the more sensitive to the way life changes, and the lack is felt only later. I love the inclusion of the sci-fi novels and the way you linked them to the future.

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  7. Wow, Shay.
    I always thought that line Gitchee Goomee was so fascinating and so mysterious. I just love LOVE your use of it here, confessing that I had forgotten about it since I was a kid and certainly never looked it up. It sounds so great. And invoking it in the same unflinching writing about childhood with the phrase "little pitchers have big ears" is so brilliant and wonderful.
    It also brings to mind one of my favorite movies, Moonrise Kingdom, and all the feelings that brings up. I adore this reflection.

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  8. Though I'm a not so familiar with the nature you referring to, I can feel the little girl seeing a parting between parents... this is so full of nostalgia and mourning... yes a very good poem

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  9. Oh, the nostalgic scene beset with the hollowness of what was to come is so beautifully penned. There are no proclamations, just the imagery and the few words say it all. I loved how powerful that closing is.
    -HA

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  10. I cant even find the right words to respond to this amazing glimpse into one summer and it's impact on your life!! So eloquently worded with snippets of all that made me see what you saw and felt as a child then. I love this!!!!! Though it also broke my heart! 💔

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  11. Down the beach, my parents argued in pantomime.

    that is sheer perfection for the story that speaks volumes. as if children don't notice.
    and the ending of this piece, the idea of being crushed under the weight of this troubled relationship, is very well expressed in those last two lines.
    there is great sensitivity in the last stanza, with the subtle detailing, like hair wetting at the ends whilst bending down to pick, that make this subtly well done yet very "loud" for the messages.

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  12. You are so opposite to my mom =^x^=
    You go for sci-fi , My mom she goes for historical

    Thanks for your wish =^x^=
    Have a lovely day

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  13. Pat highlights the same phrase that grabbed hold of me, and all of it ~

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